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Cryssy
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Quote Cryssy Replybullet Topic: Last details?
    Posted: 30 August 2005 at 4:55pm

She needs a name...Also this is pretty much constantly updated. So watch for a new image.
Also if you see something blatantly wrong...Tell me now. XD

I worked on all the suggested edits so far....I do listen unless it is impossible for me to do something

I am considering having the orb radiate a pink light.....should I try that or would that be too much and pointless?

I know the dress is too sharp in contrast with pink and blue.......I am working.........but I love the hair



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Quote EyeCraft Replybullet Posted: 30 August 2005 at 11:57pm
Looking really good so far, I especially like how you've gotten so much detail in the hair. The art style and palette reminds me of Heroes Of Might & Magic II, very fantasy looking.

The smallest globes on the ground look a little spikey, though I don't know if theres anything you can do about that, maybe use the shadow colour to AA?

The arm holding the fan doesnt look right, it seems to short and bent awkwardly, the elbow should be a little more prominant.

Looking forward to seeing it finished
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Quote Cryssy Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2005 at 6:57am

Thank you so much I will try these out as soon as I get done with classes :)

 

Ummm I have never heard of Heroes of Might and Magic.......Don't hurt me XD

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Quote sedgemonkey Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2005 at 8:11am
The foot looks a little elongated and the shading of the knee looks a little much. The orb and staff look kind of plain now, but you said you are still working so maybe you just havn't gotten there yet.  Other than that it's looking really good so far.
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Quote Cryssy Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2005 at 11:52am

Yea I haven't gotten to the orb and the staff...I will tone down the knee and try to shorten the foot without throwing off the leg too much lol

 

But thank you I will try it.

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Quote Rifts Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2005 at 3:42pm
loveing the detail in the hair, this peice is good. however i dont know if
ur eaving it for something but their are a couple of random black pixels
in her hair by her hips... they dont look like they are atached to
anything not finished, so you might have missed them... or i may be
wrong XD
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Quote Cryssy Replybullet Posted: 31 August 2005 at 8:25pm
those black bands will be gold when I finish. They are like the belly dancer chains XD

btw there is a background for this too but I haven't gotten to it yet I want her done first
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Quote randomblink Replybullet Posted: 07 September 2005 at 7:33am

WOW! She's hot...

Very nice design, the fan rocks...

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