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Rifts
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Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
   Topic: ISO room :Update 3:Posted: 06 September 2005 at 2:20pm |
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going back to my isometric pixel roots i have made this peice here
any CnC or ideas.. i also want any tips you can give me on makeing better windows lol 
UPDATE!! 
ok i redid a few things.. the hedge being one major thing... and im not too pleased with the outcome... but i ever want to have to do that again!! its not wuite finished, any CnC? UPDATE 2!!!! 
added a few things, i think im going to change one of the pools to not be identicle to the other, but apart from that any new CnC??? UPDATE 3!!!! 
i think i have finished mainly the room design, i want to add little details around the room lik ei did at the bar, ie coasters n stuff but i cant think of anything any ideas? Edited by Rifts |
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829 |
Posted: 06 September 2005 at 3:19pm |
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looks very nice. You might want to desaturate some of the colors. Floor tiles especially! Add some water reflections, and wood textures where needed. The palm trees are very nice and feel alive!
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Zoomrix
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Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342 |
Posted: 06 September 2005 at 6:45pm |
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Yep. I agree with Pixel Outlaw. Some of those textures like on the counter and on the red carpet floor really stand out in a bad way. The green long bush strand between the bar and the red carpet area... don't really look like bushes at the moment. Try a different texture maybe? Style is beaming! |
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Rifts
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Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
Posted: 07 September 2005 at 11:12am |
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ah ok, i was kinda testing out some texure and pattern ideas i sea they
didnt work too well ill work on it |
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Buddy
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Joined: 02 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
Posted: 07 September 2005 at 6:19pm |
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Looks really good! I can't wait to see how you make the people.
You did a really good job giving stuff textures. Keep it up!
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Rifts
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Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
Posted: 08 September 2005 at 1:58pm |
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Update!!!! check above
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PixelSnader
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Posted: 09 September 2005 at 3:11am |
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hedge looks better, but it still looks like a textured square, show the viewer that there allso are placec where you can look very deep inside, maybe even thourgh the plants, and try to make the outlines less straight allso the stone is very obviously tiled, something im no fan of, and why are you using such weird patterns on the bar, door and carpet? :S lastly, the water doesnt look like water to me, try desaturating it a bit and making some ripples and reflections on the surface |
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Filax_666
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Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108 |
Posted: 14 September 2005 at 1:54am |
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I think the water needs some work, as well as those bushes...
otherwise its a great piece! 
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ddustin
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Joined: 24 September 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
Posted: 24 September 2005 at 2:16am |
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mm, what are your plans for the piece?
Thats the kind of art i would love to make a game for... |
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space2
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Joined: 17 July 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 48 |
Posted: 24 September 2005 at 2:42am |
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You should work a bit on the water pools: add some naked ladies in it ;-)
Looks good btw! I like the small details, for example the corrosion on the bottom of the walls. But I would add some bigger textures as well. |
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Rifts
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Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
Posted: 27 September 2005 at 11:18am |
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UPDATED check above :). hopes ya likes
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Wannahlakujuu
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Posted: 27 September 2005 at 12:19pm |
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Oh, just noticed, but I don't like the stripes on the leaves of the trees. |
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ddustin
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Joined: 24 September 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
Posted: 28 September 2005 at 1:29am |
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i want to add little details around the room lik ei did at the bar, ie coasters n stuff but i cant think of anything any ideas? Magazines on the cushion chairs, a coat rack, a lamp, a wall hanging lamp, fish in the pond, muddy footsteps somewhere |
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Either decrease the contrast between the colors that make up the texture or desaturate them. 
