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Fhqwhgads
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Quote Fhqwhgads Replybullet Topic: Nintendo DS
    Posted: 11 September 2005 at 7:34pm



Well, any tips? Note this was made so I can just practice pixeling skillz.


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Quote Amythist Replybullet Posted: 11 September 2005 at 8:22pm
the two plates look.. crooked compared to eachother. And it could do with a bit more shading, but I like what you've got so far!
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Quote EyeCraft Replybullet Posted: 12 September 2005 at 1:49am
Hmm good start, but the proportions seem off, the top piece looks too small. The speaker holes dont seem to be at the right angle also. And the D-Pad (+ thing) seems out of perspective. 
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 13 September 2005 at 2:37am
The upper screen has a black outline you should try to define more. I
agree with EyeCraft about the speaker holes and the D-Pad.

And remember: it has to close, so try to make the two parts the
same size.

If you keep up the good work im sure it'll be fine in the end
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