Pixel Joint Forum: Spritey Jack

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   Haven't done anything serious lately. I decided to start on a platform game using my character Jack as the main focus.  ::)

So far only have the basic shading and coloring and shaping up done. 
I decided to stop at this point and get some hard-on critique because it looked odd to me. The whole thing.  :-\
Thanks in advance for all the help I'm sure I'll get.  ;D

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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Topic: Spritey Jack Posted: 01 October 2005 at 10:20pm
	Haven't done anything serious lately. I decided to start on a platform game using my character Jack as the main focus. ::) So far only have the basic shading and coloring and shaping up done. I decided to stop at this point and get some hard-on critique because it looked odd to me. The whole thing. :-\ Thanks in advance for all the help I'm sure I'll get. ;D
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 02 October 2005 at 10:38am
	pretty good but the missing face is freeking me out
	got game?
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 02 October 2005 at 4:48pm
	I'm not done yet. I need hard on critique
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 02 October 2005 at 7:25pm
	Use darker versions of the colors for the outlines.
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 02 October 2005 at 8:07pm
	You mean sellout? I'm not too good with that, but thanks for the tip, I should learn that.
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 02 October 2005 at 8:43pm
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