Pixel Joint Forum: PREGNANT MAROWAK

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   ITS A MAROWAK THAT'S PREGNANT.
NO TIME TO EXPLAIN.

does it look like a marowak?
does it look pregnant?
does the pose look correct?
I've been trying out new palettes lately, I wanna get into that brighter style kinda, how does this look?

unfortunately the scene is going to be at sunset, so I have to change the shading and colors.

what should I do to the palette for the adjust in time?
and again at night?

and if you have any suggestions of your own, please share!

uhm.. thanks

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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Topic: PREGNANT MAROWAK Posted: 08 July 2009 at 9:19pm
	ITS A MAROWAK THAT'S PREGNANT. NO TIME TO EXPLAIN. does it look like a marowak? does it look pregnant? does the pose look correct? I've been trying out new palettes lately, I wanna get into that brighter style kinda, how does this look? unfortunately the scene is going to be at sunset, so I have to change the shading and colors. what should I do to the palette for the adjust in time? and again at night? and if you have any suggestions of your own, please share! uhm.. thanks

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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 08 July 2009 at 9:38pm
	You might try making her front leg straight, with ~~all~~ most of her weight on it, and her back leg bending backwards. I think it might look a bit more dynamic. Also, her front leg seems to connect to her pregnant belly? Think of bones. [EDIT] The suggested change of pose would, of course, effect her whole body, not just her legs, in order to maintain balance. But you probably knew that already :D Edited by Hatch - 08 July 2009 at 9:46pm
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 08 July 2009 at 10:43pm
	Thanks for commenting, you rock hatch! I dunno what you really meant, so I tried two things. Either look good? EDIT: Rofl it's starting to look like a walk cycle >.< I hardly recognize you without your old avatar! Edited by skeddles - 08 July 2009 at 10:45pm

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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 2:47am
	pokemons lay eggs, it can't be pregnant.
	please click it, otherwise it will die, and it seems special.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 6:14am
	don't ruin my fun do you really think I should change it? Edited by skeddles - 09 July 2009 at 6:28am

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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 6:41am
	No. Who cares? I guess people are passionate about their pokemans though. feh. [EDIT] Number 2 is more or less what I meant. I think that pose looks the most natural and suggestive of a walk. Edited by Hatch - 09 July 2009 at 6:42am
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ellie-is Commander Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 706	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 7:06am
	Number 2 looks more pregnant. But the top of the head is a bit rounder. Cubone has a skull on his head, but on marowak, that is actually it's head. Maybe it would look more a marowak with the bone too. And its belly has those stripes on it that I dont see on your picture. And yeah, pokémon lay eggs :P
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 8:42am
	how does this look? attempted shading and palette ps: marowaks give live birth

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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 11:01am
	Old colors and simpler shading looked much better in my opinion. more in the pokemans style. and maybe keep that back leg one flat color? Looks too in-fronty now, like she's starting to curtsey. Lastly, seems like the front leg should blend a bit more softly with the body. Looks too separated.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 11:50am
	It's not just a random pixel, it's part of a story, so I have to keep the time of day, so I have to keep the colors and shading I'm going to use that palette for day time scenes, but this isn't day time. I have done a lot more on it, but I am still very willing to make changes still think the back foot should be solid colored?

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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 11:57am
	oooh, that's lookin' sexy. I formally retract my complaints. I'm undecided how I feel about the back leg :( Someone else voice an opinion!
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Quake Commander Joined: 03 September 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 12:11pm
	Yes/no? Just made some of the outlines softer, done back leg..
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 12:27pm

	I am the jesus of PJ.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 1:03pm
	Yes, thank you souly. I smoothed it out a bit more, I'm gonna submit it to the main site to get some feedback there.

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Quake Commander Joined: 03 September 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 190	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 1:08pm
	Yes/no? Just made some of the outlines softer, done back leg..
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 2:09pm
	Shorten his furthest leg... it's longer then his closest one and it's bent. And somehow it's on the same part of the ground as his other foot? They are on the same row of pixels which is impossible. I'm really liking the color of the helmet. Another nitpick is his BONE is wayyyyy too small. Edited by Souly - 09 July 2009 at 2:09pm
	I am the jesus of PJ.
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skeddles Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 636	Posted: 09 July 2009 at 2:14pm
	haha, you're right about the leg, I'll raise it up ya, stupid bone... >.< it's supposed to be at kind of an angle, but doesn't really look llike it

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