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Dhr. Bosch
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    Posted: 31 July 2009 at 4:07pm


this lander is driving me crazy. somebody please! say something usefull.
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Quote YaDeau Replybullet Posted: 31 July 2009 at 4:17pm

I think it would look better if you used a different then white on the lander, that's all i would be able to see what's wrong from my end, but again I'm new to pixel art.

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Quote Dhr. Bosch Replybullet Posted: 31 July 2009 at 4:51pm
yeah the white looks crappy, it's mainly there because i don't know what to do yet with the colours on the lander
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Quote YaDeau Replybullet Posted: 31 July 2009 at 7:15pm
if this is for the challenge thing I would use the gray part of the palette that you can work with that would make things easer. I would change the white to orange/yellow color and the brown to the lightest gray see how that looks 
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Quote inkhunter Replybullet Posted: 31 July 2009 at 8:00pm
Originally posted by Dhr. Bosch



this lander is driving me crazy. somebody please! say something usefull.

trying to give you an idea of how you could shade the lander. you could probably clean the face up and darken the outlines a bit too.

oh, and fill up the empty looking space (under the lander's splatter and on the forehead) with some texture. comparing it with the sides, it looks way too smooth.

so far it's looking great though. ;D
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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 31 July 2009 at 10:38pm
I believe this is the image you are basing this off of?



try emulating the shape and shine of the bullet in that one
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Quote Dhr. Bosch Replybullet Posted: 01 August 2009 at 4:09am
my actual reference was this http://www.weirdwildrealm.com/filmimages/voyage-lune-1902poster.jpg though it hardly differs. but the point was to, instead of the bullet, put the appolo landing vehicle in his eye...

and thank you inkhunter that was a very costructive edit. but i still need to find a way to make the lander more reconizable
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