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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Topic: Street (WIP) Need C&C
    Posted: 02 October 2005 at 4:29pm

It still needs something to bring it to life..  C&C

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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 02 October 2005 at 4:49pm

needs details. Also, the bevelled edge.. the outgoing edge... on the building on the left should be a light toned colour - not a darker one. This gives the 3d feel it needs.

I would suggest adding details to the bricks definitely. Adding some highlights and shades on the would give this piece a huge boost

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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 02 October 2005 at 5:56pm

Is this better ?

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Quote pangaru Replybullet Posted: 08 October 2005 at 3:43pm
Cool, you could add some cars, or maybe some people crossing the street..

Or aliens
Looks great so far!


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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 10 October 2005 at 2:16pm

Originally posted by pangaru

Cool, you could add some cars, or maybe some people crossing the street..

Or aliens
Looks great so far!

Thanks

I'm not that good at doing cars or people yet....  Could someone help me with this PLEASE

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 10 October 2005 at 2:49pm
just look at any street near your for ideas, it doesnt matter if yur not
gd at cars just practice and post some wips to get c&c, i suggest
getting rid of those horrid black lines around ur bricks.
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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 10 October 2005 at 3:49pm

Originally posted by Shark

i suggest getting rid of those horrid black lines around ur bricks.
Does this look better ?

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 10 October 2005 at 11:26pm
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Quote Fugitive Replybullet Posted: 13 October 2005 at 5:34am

Originally posted by Shark

much

Thanks for your help Shark

All I need to do now is try and bring it to life....

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