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Sonic_Reaper
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Quote Sonic_Reaper Replybullet Topic: Various Sprite Work
    Posted: 14 October 2005 at 1:36pm

Hey guys!  SR here;  anyway here's a series of running cycles from multiple directions.  I'm very happy with how the east/west and south running cycles turned out, but the north one looks like complete crap.  It's the legs mostly.  I don't know how to go about it;  I've been playing around with it for awhile now.  It looks like he's stomping as opposed to be as smooth as I would like it to have been.

Well, Cheers!  And thanks for checking this out.



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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 1:54pm
i think that his head should be a lil bit raised on the first sprite.aside
that, its lookin good.
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Quote Sonic_Reaper Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 2:13pm

Uhm, thanks.  Not sure what you mean about the head though.

Working on the North running animation at the moment.  I think I figured out the the kink in the system.



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Quote Citizen_Insane Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 2:37pm

from what I can tell, there needs to be more shoulder movement.. and upper body rotation.. you know what I mean?

 

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Quote Sonic_Reaper Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 2:46pm

New update up for the North Running.  The legs did not match up with the other animations, that's why it looked a little off.  Looks a bit better now.

Added body rotation as well :)

 

Heh but now I am seeing some problems with the arms and shading consistency :p  *gets back to work*

I am getting paid to make these, so any small critiques are greatly appreciated.



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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 2:53pm
Ok he is leaning too far in I believe.
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Quote Sonic_Reaper Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 3:06pm

Okay I might as well use this thread to post other related work.  Here he is again punching dramatically

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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 6:06pm
Originally posted by Sonic_Reaper

Uhm, thanks.  Not sure what you mean about the head though.

 

It looks like he is looking at the ground

got game?
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Quote Filax_666 Replybullet Posted: 14 October 2005 at 11:47pm
thats it Psychotic_Carp! i probably didnt make myself clear...sorry for
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The punching one is looking good too.
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2005 at 1:50am
on the punching i think his right arm needs to move more, also the
leg goes quite far forward (even though it is supposed to be
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 15 October 2005 at 4:49am
hte animations etc are good, but the dark skin colour is nagging, its really to dark, makes it look more like he has a beard, then looking like shadows

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