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Quote ~R~ Replybullet Topic: WIP: Faceless Thief
    Posted: 02 November 2009 at 8:24am


He's an generic NPC/Enemy, so he's faceless, but i don't know how to improve his first frame.
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Quote killerbee Replybullet Posted: 02 November 2009 at 9:57am
right hand a bit larger than left
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 02 November 2009 at 10:04am
Eep, jpg! You should always save and post pixel art as png or gif. Jpg is lossy, and while it's fine for the messy blur of pixels and colors in photographic images, it does horrible things to your carefully placed pixels and thoughtfully hand-picked colors.

Also, many image hosts convert bmp to jpg without bothering to ask how you feel about it.
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Quote ~R~ Replybullet Posted: 02 November 2009 at 3:45pm
Originally posted by Hatch

Also, many image hosts convert bmp to jpg without bothering to ask how you feel about it.


Exactly what happened, and there is another upload, already with the fixed Hand:

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Quote Ryath Replybullet Posted: 02 November 2009 at 3:46pm
Couple things I'm thinking are off with it here. First, he seems off balance, like he's leaning too far back. Second, the hat is a little odd, why's it so pointy? Next, his waist seems to drop too far on our left, his right. This is probably what has me thinking he's off balance, too. Lastly, the shading on his legs and arms are coming from different directions. You need to pick a direction. Sorry if I seem to be too critical, I tend to sound that way. I like the color choices a lot, they're good. You could probably reduce it a bit by using the shoe colors for the gun.

Nice sprite, keep working.
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