Pixel Joint Forum: latex and legs

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   Before I go into more detail I would like another pair of eyes (or many ) to help me make sure anatomy looks good! 

Just a random pratice for MSpaint 

If anyone wants to color/edit feel free. Just let me know u are using it.

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-Z- Seaman Joined: 03 December 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Topic: latex and legs Posted: 05 December 2009 at 9:12pm
	Before I go into more detail I would like another pair of eyes (or many ) to help me make sure anatomy looks good! Just a random pratice for MSpaint If anyone wants to color/edit feel free. Just let me know u are using it.
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ekobor Commander Joined: 20 February 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 194	Posted: 05 December 2009 at 9:49pm
	The only thing that sticks out way obvious to me is the connection of the breast to the chest. It needs to connect to her underarm more... Like on this woman, which I link to due to censored nudity, as I don't know the board's rules on that sort. argh, link won't work. URL: http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/2223/breastexample.png Edited by ekobor - 05 December 2009 at 9:50pm
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-Z- Seaman Joined: 03 December 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 05 December 2009 at 10:06pm
	I agree, was having a hard time getting the right shape/size. It would really help if I even had a mouse. Working with this laptop is a pain. I know I also want to curve the line at the top of her left leg. Thanks for commenting! <3 *link worked. Edited by -Z- - 05 December 2009 at 10:08pm
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-Z- Seaman Joined: 03 December 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 07 December 2009 at 8:53pm
	Sooo. I started to add some detail.. i know the eyes aren't right but I like the colors i used. I think her eyes are too open... she looks shocked lol. updated Original
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 07 December 2009 at 10:52pm
	the body shape is much too realistic to allow for such cartoony anime eyes. I like the outline of the head more in the original.
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Manupix Commander Joined: 05 November 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 771	Posted: 08 December 2009 at 11:47am
	I agree about the eyes. Also, the breasts look much too high, and I'm not convinced by the torso profile though I can't point what's wrong with it. I don't really understand the reason for the missing parts: is it a composition choice, or is there going to be something else in these places? Is she leaning against a wall? Shading is a good start. Could use one darker shade; highlights make the skin look oily: that would be right for the latex but maybe not for the skin. There shouldn't be a shade on the left side of the nose.
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-Z- Seaman Joined: 03 December 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 7	Posted: 08 December 2009 at 10:02pm
	@ ThereIsNoCure in my edit I said how the eyes are too open so I totally agree about the eyes but I like the shading/colors. I know what you mean about the shape of her face. Once I add hair I think it may look better, we will see right! @ Manupix the breast are high because she is wearing latex and latex is normally very tight, does that make sence? Reason for the missing parts is i'm not done lol. Yes she is leanning. Do either of you (or anyone) think her back leg is off? I'm not feelin it. Any ideas on that? still not liking her eyes too much but the sketch of the hair does help I think. Need to change the shading around the eyes. Know the hair needs work but it is just a sketch. Also, the darkest shading by her arm/shoulder that looks almost as if to connect the outline to her underarm doesn't look right. I know. Think her torso is too long... going to bring it up some =P
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