Pixel Joint Forum: 3rd attempt at pixel art, floating island

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this is my 3rd try on pixel art, please c&c this especially the ice and mountain area, i'd really appreciate it


Edited by Rapio - 21 March 2010 at 12:28pm

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Rapio Seaman Joined: 18 January 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Topic: 3rd attempt at pixel art, floating island Posted: 21 March 2010 at 12:07pm
	this is my 3rd try on pixel art, please c&c this especially the ice and mountain area, i'd really appreciate it Edited by Rapio - 21 March 2010 at 12:28pm
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Maxac Seaman Joined: 01 March 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 22 March 2010 at 3:33pm
	Is that flowers in the snow?
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Rapio Seaman Joined: 18 January 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 23 March 2010 at 10:17am
	no, it was supposed to be a three headed snake, but i had no idea on how to make it look good
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Sai Seaman Joined: 08 January 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 23 March 2010 at 1:43pm
	The debris kind of disrupts the flow. I think it would look better if you removed them or improved on their composition. The perspective looks distorted due to the inconsistency in angles with the tree, volcanoes and the mountain with the clouds.< id="gwProxy" ="">< ="jsCall();" id="jsProxy" ="">
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snowk Seaman Joined: 02 June 2014 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 34	Posted: 24 March 2010 at 7:55pm
	though the island is viewed mostly top down with a tilt back, the scenery looks almost side on view. this makes the piece look lees realistic. good for your third attempet
	-Snowk
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