Pixel Joint Forum: Desert yeti adventure!!

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   So anywho, figured its been so long since i could be bothered pixelling, id take another crack at it! so i present to you, the horrendously mediocre, Desert yeti!!

the leg is dithered cos i was trying it out, dont like it at all.

its not FOR anything, but i might make a little idle animation later.

anyway, i know its hard to critique a piece that is as unrealistic as this, but please, have a go! :)

Edited by bannanawalrus - 07 December 2010 at 11:36am

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bannanawalrus Commander Joined: 23 April 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Topic: Desert yeti adventure!! Posted: 07 December 2010 at 10:16am
	So anywho, figured its been so long since i could be bothered pixelling, id take another crack at it! so i present to you, the horrendously mediocre, Desert yeti!! the leg is dithered cos i was trying it out, dont like it at all. its not FOR anything, but i might make a little idle animation later. anyway, i know its hard to critique a piece that is as unrealistic as this, but please, have a go! :) Edited by bannanawalrus - 07 December 2010 at 11:36am
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bannanawalrus Commander Joined: 23 April 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Posted: 11 December 2010 at 1:08pm
	i guess not? it doesnt look very good, but i really dont know what to changem and i really want to improve my pixels...:)
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BrightBit Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 98	Posted: 11 December 2010 at 5:30pm
	Hi, Well, basically the anatomy doesn't look good and the pose is too generic. Anatomy is difficult to learn but it will make future drawing sessions easier and more rewarding. I've done a little tweeking regarding the third issue: the lighting Greetings BrightBit Edited by BrightBit - 11 December 2010 at 5:33pm
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bannanawalrus Commander Joined: 23 April 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 230	Posted: 12 December 2010 at 5:59am
	Thanks alot!! ive edited it to try and rectify the issues you pointed out. Note that although the torso is VERY similar, i made it myself using yours as a reference, it was just that yours was almost exactly how i had envisioned it to be:) still not satisfied with the (his) left leg and hat.
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BrightBit Midshipman Joined: 11 May 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 98	Posted: 12 December 2010 at 7:13am
	Hi, you don't have to justify yourself. You are allowed to use my version as you like. If you ask me I would put everything to the public domain. Knowledge and art should be free (and many other things, too). Greetings BrightBit
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