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Quote NoLegsOnTheBed Replybullet Topic: Duke Nukem
    Posted: 04 February 2011 at 1:19pm
Just some days ago the word got out about the Duke Nukem Forever release-date, as a big Duke-fan I couldn't be happier.

That's why I started on this little tribute-thingy.
Bear in mind that it is a WIP (what else) and any C&C would be greatly appreciated!



Thanks, take care!
//NLOTB
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Quote greenmango99 Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2011 at 4:03pm
The shading shirt looks a little bit odd. First of all, that triangular thing at the top of his shirt (sweat?) is too triangular. Also, the other dark spot on his shirt near the bottom also looks a little out of place. The face looks great though
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Quote NoLegsOnTheBed Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2011 at 4:07pm
Originally posted by greenmango99

The shading shirt looks a little bit odd. First of all, that triangular thing at the top of his shirt (sweat?) is too triangular. Also, the other dark spot on his shirt near the bottom also looks a little out of place. The face looks great though


Yeah, I was thinking; "Hey, he's an action hero, ofc he's got the classic 'Bruce Willis' sweat" and yeah, I know it looks off and I'm fixing it :) as for the other dark spor, it's just for reference :)

Thanks, real happy with the face:)
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Quote Alexandre Belmonte Replybullet Posted: 07 February 2011 at 5:04pm
Perhaps cleaning a little the lines would be better. And a more contrast, I almost couldn't saw his eyebrows.

It is a nice Duke! Hope you continue to work on him!


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