Not sure if this is the place for this, or if there even is a place for this, but with wishful thinking, I'd like to request a little help with this icon:



It's based on this character:

http://images2.layoutsparks.com/1/22871/roy-mustang-cartoon-poster.jpg

It just looks too... off. The eyes are ugly and the hair could be better surely. I am not a talented pixel artist, though I have tried. If someone could make an edit and show me their work, it'd be appreciated. Thanks!