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    Posted: 15 June 2011 at 6:49am


I'm really concerned with the face at the moment, the problem are the eyes look wrong to me. I spent hours working on this and I really need help if anyone can in help correcting it?.

Thank you pixel gods.
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Quote dpixel Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2011 at 9:19am
I'm probably the last one who should be giving advice on this, but I played around for a while.  At first glance it looks sort of anime.  Which tells me the jaw/cheek is off.  When I adjusted that and pulled (her) right eye in, I get this:

Going for even more anime style, I got this:


Hope it helps a little.
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Quote acronym Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2011 at 9:48am
Thanks but if you look at my drawing I done which I'm basing the pixel off it may give you a better idea. Thanks for the help though




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Quote Tart Replybullet Posted: 18 June 2011 at 11:07pm
I think the issue is that the eyes are a bit far apart in your pixel. DPixel had the right idea of moving them closer.
If you're trying to make it look closer to that ref, then you might try making the chin pointier and the cheek bone a pixel or two higher before it concaves.
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Quote acronym Replybullet Posted: 19 June 2011 at 1:15pm
Thank you, got the problem fixed but now I'm stuck with the arm here:
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Quote Wayne Replybullet Posted: 20 June 2011 at 1:45am
Hi, I thought the eyes looked fine. They are wide set but I see that as a stylization choice... look at Miyazaki's Ponyo for example.

I know you're posting WIP but since you mentioned the eye area feeling odd I thought I'd mention the outer socket area of the left eye...

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