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Quote jamesdude01 Replybullet Topic: Logo DonutWorm
    Posted: 10 August 2011 at 1:15pm
Im making a logo for my new blog im setting up, i want it to be pixel art, So i have done a Prototype then tryied to turn it in to pixel art, It kind of failed, Any advice for a noob
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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 10 August 2011 at 1:55pm
I don't understand the red outline on the donut, sorry I wasn't paying much attention



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Quote jamesdude01 Replybullet Posted: 10 August 2011 at 2:11pm
Only the bottem half of the canvas is my pixel art (attemp) the top half ( witch you included) Is just a quick sketch of what i want it to be like.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 10 August 2011 at 4:10pm
pick a light source, shade donut accordingly. remember than it's a rounded form, so the lighting changes around the donut hole as well as the exterior edge. the outline is too saturated, which may be the 'red outline' mentioned above. lots of jaggies on the worm, use smoother curves, don't jump from a 1 pixel line to a 4 pixel line. I'd worry about defining the volumes of the worm before adding the sectional lines (which means define forms with light and shadow). hole in the middle is a tall oval, rather than a circle. there's not enough contrast between the base and shadow color of the donut atm.
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Quote jamesdude01 Replybullet Posted: 11 August 2011 at 1:36am
I have tryed to improve it, i feel i have done a good job on the donut, but it still needs some work, And the worm is just crap lol, I cant seem to get the shape right,
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