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Aastikya
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    Posted: 17 November 2011 at 6:53am


Here is the end product. I still find problems in it but don't know how to fix. So, please help
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Quote Kravvon Nar'roth Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2011 at 7:25am
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Here is the end product. I still find problems in it but don't know how to fix. So, please help
What problems, specifically, do you see? Identifying and understanding the problems is the first step to fixing them.

Off the top of my head, the grass (foreground & background) could use more contrast, and as for that black line at the edge of the road...
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Quote Aastikya Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2011 at 8:33am
The air blow indicators look jaggy but I find it difficult to fix.
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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 17 November 2011 at 10:47am
does the guy have a green shirt??   Not a good choice against the grass when your greens have such low contrast. The hilt of the umbrella seems to be off center.  I smoothed the air blow lines:
 

Also, it is never a great idea to use neutral greys, especially with vibrant colors.  it just don't look very good.


Edited by Frost Butt - 17 November 2011 at 11:41am
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