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Quote iNana Replybullet Topic: Feedback would really help!
    Posted: 21 January 2012 at 8:16pm
Hello my name is Matt and my online name is iNana. I have been doing pixel art for a game for about 5 months and here's what I have so far! I'm really looking for some feedback on how to improve :)
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 22 January 2012 at 12:07am
lots of pillow-shading and banding on the blue skeletal figure.

it's best to choose one thing to have critiqued so we can focus our comments.

saturation is too high on the heart, heart has jaggy outlines, the chains could interact with the heart more convincingly (being tighter, cinching the heart a bit). the helmet thing on the left has confused light sources. banding/dithering when it isn't necessary/too high saturation, overused primary colors are the general issues.
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Quote iNana Replybullet Posted: 22 January 2012 at 7:18am
Ok I'll just post one thing next time, this was my first post :p thank you for your help!
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