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Adcrusher
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 04 January 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 148 |
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Hi! I need some critique on these werewolf cycles. I think the arms are
the part that I'm having the most trouble with (front and back cycles.)
Any critique is welcome and would be very helpful! Thanks!
Front: ![]() Back ![]() Side ![]() Thank you again! |
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Blueman1010
Seaman ![]() Joined: 04 October 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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The side one looks really good, but the front looks like it needs more frames, and the arms should be moving more. The back one's hands get to big when there close to you and the shading on his legs changes really weirdly. I think they both should have the same bobbing movement like the side one does.
hope this can help. |
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Adcrusher
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 04 January 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 148 |
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Thank you everyone for your critique! I think the animations have improved much in this update.
I redid the back to have 8 frames and the same up down motion as the rest ![]() I hunched the side view over a bit ![]() The front is probably my favorite now, add the twist and more frames. ![]() I started the front attack, but I need to edit it a bit. ![]() NateK did a great edit for me that I need to study for my next update ![]() Thank you again, critique is always welcome. |
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Bokeblender
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The side one is great, but I think the tail needs to move like it does in the others.
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