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    Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:17am

Been working on this for a bit, will be a boss in a frozen ballroom. Needs a few more frames to smooth it out and Im still figuring out what I want to do with the dress towards the end. sorry for the nudity but I thought it would be more creepy if it seems like shes still hiding her true from. any feedback would be welcome thanks.
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Quote Stacy3601 Replybullet Posted: 27 January 2013 at 3:04pm
some things i noticed first off
the bright blue 'ice' that appears from her butt down starts out on her butt but in the next frame its below her butt. not sure if that is intentional. if it is then it needs more frames to make the transition smoother.
when she tosses the glass i think there needs to be more frames starting closer to her hand. as it is now it looks like it just appears to the right and then exits the page.
i really like the last frame. its a cool design. but the first few frames where she is in the blue dress need more shading.
its a good start. just needs more frames
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Quote Abides Replybullet Posted: 27 January 2013 at 3:56pm
my thought was that the dress being more of a watery blue would kinda melt off as water wich she would draw from to freeze still thinkin about it. Word on the smoothing out of the glass toss and the shading I will revise soon thanks
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Quote Stacy3601 Replybullet Posted: 27 January 2013 at 4:14pm
i see what you are saying about the dress. it jumps down too fast then. it needs at lease another frame or two on that section
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