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Akira
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Quote Akira Replybullet Topic: My alien friend
    Posted: 17 January 2006 at 1:23am
pixelled this from a sketch today:

16 colours
Will post the sketch if anyone wants to see it.

any crits before I put it in my gallery?
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 17 January 2006 at 2:59pm
Ha ha! I love it. But I think that his jaw is shaped oddly and the shading below it on his neck is either too dark or too much.
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Quote Blick Replybullet Posted: 17 January 2006 at 5:08pm
The highlight and reflected light in his eyes defy the lightsource. The jugular on the far side is way bulky and I think you should show some of his far shoulder. And like Aleiav said, the shadow under the jaw is pretty dark. Another thing about the jugular is that at the highest point, it's going straight up the neck. It should actually look as though it's going to connect behind the jaw below where the ear connects.
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