Pixel Joint Forum: Angel & Demon (NSFW)

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   Hello forum, i'm doing a remake of this silly little submission of mine,

http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/79684.htm

due to MikauKahn calling me out on being lazy. I mean he was right but still, what a punk! ;p

Here it is:

Anyway I'm hoping to get a bit of feedback on those two as my pixel knowledge is starting to stretch. 

Lemme know what you think!

Edited by AlcopopStar - 08 August 2013 at 5:26am

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AlcopopStar Midshipman Joined: 28 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 35	Topic: Angel & Demon (NSFW) Posted: 31 July 2013 at 3:00am
	Hello forum, i'm doing a remake of this silly little submission of mine, http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/79684.htm due to MikauKahn calling me out on being lazy. I mean he was right but still, what a punk! ;p Here it is: Anyway I'm hoping to get a bit of feedback on those two as my pixel knowledge is starting to stretch. Lemme know what you think! Edited by AlcopopStar - 08 August 2013 at 5:26am
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StepDragon Commander Joined: 03 April 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 258	Posted: 31 July 2013 at 5:09pm
	I really like where this is going. I must say the devil feels a little underwhelming at the moment for a couple of reasons. The first of which is pure space, she takes up less. Also, the apparent number of colors use lends more toward the angel. In your second image the devil has more of an angry face.. where as in the first image she was more sadistic. In the first picture, they both appear to be putting their hand on their chest (some kind of pledge?), however in the second image, the devil looks like she's touching her throat. I think this would be really cool if you upped the size of the devil by a few pixels, fixed the hand and face, and (what if you) made her hair transform into a flame at the end! I think you could do that, and it would offset both the size of the angels wings, and the color difference. Either way, you have the line-art and coloring skill to pull this off. Great job!
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Daanvdk Seaman Joined: 07 November 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 31 July 2013 at 5:52pm
	I think you should give the devil wings too to give it a bit more focus. It isn't really equal at the moment. The angel takes up more space and her wings are definitely some attention seeking eyecandy. I think going with some bat-like wings would be really cool for the devil. Also the devil's hand should be a bit lower since she seems to be choking herself now.
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Kurieta Commander Joined: 25 May 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 141	Posted: 31 July 2013 at 9:04pm
	Looks amazing! My only complaint is that the demon's knee pops out way more than I think it should. I like the subtlety of the angel's knee. And I agree with the others in that the demon should have wings, if not as grand as the angel's, just something to do it justice.
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 01 August 2013 at 2:25pm
	Why are they holding their hands on their chest? For the angel this works out as it is a 'shy' inward pose, but it does not seem to fit with the devil girl who should make a powerful pose! You made a great start with having the devil open up her whole body and exposing herself, why not open her arm too? They both seem to be in mid-air. With the angel having wings it looks a bit silly for the devil to fly. Perhaps some mini wings would help?
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AlcopopStar Midshipman Joined: 28 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 35	Posted: 08 August 2013 at 4:18am
	Hey guys, thanks for all the wonderful feed back! I fixed the most erroneous sections you mentioned. Unfortunately this is going to have to be the final version due to time constrains. that said i'll be posting here much more often as I have a personal project coming up, so i'll try to give some feedback in return as well. Oh special thanks to StepDragon for the hair flame idea. :) Edited by AlcopopStar - 08 August 2013 at 5:25am
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