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SHANN0N
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Quote SHANN0N Replybullet Topic: Critique please:)
    Posted: 08 September 2013 at 1:10am


Please critique the lineart of this to death! Any suggestions at all are welcome! the Tim Burtonesque drawing was the idea this was supposed to be based on.

Edited by SHANN0N - 08 September 2013 at 4:13pm
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Quote yrizoud Replybullet Posted: 08 September 2013 at 6:00am
For the hand holding the needle, I'd expect something more like this:
http://fr.photos.com/royalty-free-images/hands-sewing/83114098#
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