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Quote warcodhiro Replybullet Topic: A little bit of advice needed
    Posted: 27 December 2013 at 11:53am
I read a few tutorials on pixel art before I tried it myself. I'm satisfied on a half, but It doesn't look quite like the drawings I've seen and I don't know where should I correct it, because I'm sure I made some mistakes.. I would be happy if I could get some advice. Thanks.


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 27 December 2013 at 12:25pm
If you don't post what you have we can't comment or give any advice...
...ooops I see a broken image link now :/
Try something like imgur.com.
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Quote warcodhiro Replybullet Posted: 27 December 2013 at 1:02pm
Sorry 
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Quote JosephSeraph Replybullet Posted: 27 December 2013 at 1:23pm
This is simple, but cute. I sure dug it. ~ ♥
I suggest you to read the tutorial So You Wanna Be a Pixel Artist (or one of the other hundreds of tutorials at pixeljoint) for they're pretty good~

As for critigue on this sprite, I don't have anything particular to say, other than awkward anatomy. The palette is unorthodox, but I like the overall browniness of it. :)
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Quote AlexHW Replybullet Posted: 27 December 2013 at 2:28pm
Take more time to exercise conveying the three dimensional forms. Study light and shadow. Explore everything in-between. 
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Quote warcodhiro Replybullet Posted: 27 December 2013 at 3:30pm
Thanks. I am doing that right now.
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