Pixel Joint Forum: *WIP* Goblin Zombie

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   I have been trying to get back into pixel art after years of being absent. So I decided to cook this little fella up to get some practice in. He's currently a work in progress but if you guys would give me some feedback, I would greatly appreciate it! Thanks!

(His hand is the only part I haven't really messed with yet because it provides me the most frustration!)

Edited by Monkey_man - 02 March 2014 at 4:31pm

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Monkey_man Commander Joined: 02 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 125	*Topic: WIP* Goblin Zombie** Posted: 02 March 2014 at 4:29pm
	I have been trying to get back into pixel art after years of being absent. So I decided to cook this little fella up to get some practice in. He's currently a work in progress but if you guys would give me some feedback, I would greatly appreciate it! Thanks! (His hand is the only part I haven't really messed with yet because it provides me the most frustration!) Edited by Monkey_man - 02 March 2014 at 4:31pm
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CELS Commander Joined: 23 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 758	Posted: 05 March 2014 at 3:16pm
	I think he looks very flat. I think this needs more contrast and you need more shadows to convey his shape better. Below his head, his body almost looks like it's cut from cardboard. And his legs look a bit too simplistic and non-functional, given the level of detail on his head.
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Monkey_man Commander Joined: 02 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 125	Posted: 06 March 2014 at 10:49am
	Okay, thanks for the feedback, I hadn't started shading in the body yet really so hopefully when I do I can get rid of that "Cardboard" look. Im most likely going to post a new WIP tonight do a little work on the face again too.
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