Pixel Joint Forum: [WiP] Knight and Enemys [C+C]

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Hello this is a  knight im currently working on im pretty happy with its body but im having trouble with its head any criticism or tips would be helpfull.

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Edited by RazielAbyssWalker - 14 August 2014 at 8:29pm

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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Topic: [WiP] Knight and Enemys [C+C] Posted: 26 July 2014 at 6:16pm
	Hello this is a knight im currently working on im pretty happy with its body but im having trouble with its head any criticism or tips would be helpfull. Current Version Edited by RazielAbyssWalker - 14 August 2014 at 8:29pm
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 26 July 2014 at 7:05pm
	Looks pretty good. I'm not a fan of the feet and hands being quite that tiny because the style here seems to be proportionate with extremity ends exaggerated so the hands and feet should follow that tho not a lot just enough to balance itself.
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Daruda Commander Joined: 03 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 103	Posted: 26 July 2014 at 7:37pm
	the curve in the right seems strange and I feel that those outline inside don't work much. Edit: I din't notice that it's your fist post here. Welcome to PJ! Edited by Daruda - 26 July 2014 at 7:48pm
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 26 July 2014 at 7:48pm
	updated
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Daruda Commander Joined: 03 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 103	Posted: 26 July 2014 at 8:42pm
	Little Edit. I used the same number of colors, so It's not too clear here and there. If you don't use a color restriction, I'd add some colors.
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 26 July 2014 at 10:19pm
	Ty for the welcome and im not really limiting my colors it isnt fully shaded it currently has an very unpleasing black outline withc i intend to change and the color palette is very bland just trying to get teh basic shape down. wich i have done some work with. Edit: some tips on getting good colors would be very helpful its something i struggle with alot. Edited by RazielAbyssWalker - 26 July 2014 at 10:21pm
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Daruda Commander Joined: 03 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 103	Posted: 27 July 2014 at 2:15pm
	Ah, I understand. I fairly like it. but I was wondering what was that brown thing around the neck and trough that it was a mantle.... Do you plan to put there a sword/shield? Any knight need one. EDIT: forgot about colors. If you need some help, search in the support forum, there are the "colors topic" and "noob tutorials" with many tutorials. ANd if haven't, read cure's tutorial there. Edited by Daruda - 27 July 2014 at 2:17pm
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 27 July 2014 at 2:51pm
	A shield and a lance/javalin will eventually be put on him. I made some more edits. i liked your cape so i tried my hand at it also your feather on top of his head an really nice so i put a tassel on top of his head not the top left area of the sprite looks less empty.
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Daruda Commander Joined: 03 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 103	Posted: 27 July 2014 at 4:41pm
	Feel more knightish. Continue like this.
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 29 July 2014 at 8:01pm
	Fully shaded Take a look C+C welcome
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StoneStephenT Commander Joined: 08 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 252	Posted: 29 July 2014 at 8:12pm
	You did a hell of a job on the metal coloring there. Getting metal to look right in pixel art takes some legit skill. Kudos!
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 09 August 2014 at 10:33pm
	Update. Turning out great C+C would be great. The Legs and belt shading have been removed until i can think of some way to better represent it. Edited by RazielAbyssWalker - 09 August 2014 at 10:34pm
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eigenbom Seaman Joined: 27 December 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 09 August 2014 at 11:49pm
	Ha, I replied to your wayofthepixel post, but I just continue here. I overpainted your knight a little more and made an arch nemesis for him.
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 10 August 2014 at 2:56pm
	Latest version got the pants these are edits based on your first edit on way of pixel
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 12 August 2014 at 10:53pm
	New update. Redid Pants,Pualdrons, Redid color palette.
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RazielAbyssWalker Seaman Joined: 26 July 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 14 August 2014 at 8:34pm
	Here is an enemy im currently working on i am trying to make it fit the same style as the knight currently it only has basic shading witha mock up palette. Some criique son the shape of him would be welecome Here is the finalized knight.
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