Ok I took the feedback I've gotten so far and tried to put it to use, I played around with the original for a while but I couldn't get it right so I started from the ground up, this time taking into account the various tips and stuff from a few of you, I think its much better than the first try but I know its still not up to par with anyones best work. I appreciate the feedback and I am going to spend as much time as I can working to get better, hopefully my progress will show eventually.

I'm still pretty bad though

Thanks for the info/feedback, I cant comment on the gallery for some reason so thanks to the people who helped on there as well.

-Viktor

Original (first try)


V2 (second try)


Edited by ViktorOneTwo - 11 April 2015 at 7:23pm

I agree now that you mention it, I wanted it to look like his facial features are sliding down as he melts but it does look odd, thank you for pointing that out lol

this look any better?

Awesome, Thanks for the ideas. I'm going to give em all a try, it does feel like there's too much going on with the tree there, i was thinking about changing the color of the sky too or something to make it a little less flat but i don't really know how lol

I tried out the suggestions you made and i think it really helps, thank you :D

Thank you very much, very useful stuff to know, I can see what you mean about the "useless" colors, and I didn't even think about the gallery/WIP forum double posting thing, I just wanted to update my avatar but that's a good point, thanks!