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    Posted: 12 December 2016 at 3:50am
So here's my lobster. It's pretty basic, but we've taken basic things on here before and turn them into amazing pieces of art. Any feedback appreciated!

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Quote TheChannel Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2016 at 1:06pm
The lobster could use 2 antennae in front of its face and a tail in behind, without those two features it looks a lot like a crab.

Given the artsyle I presume you are going for I would also recommend making the claws considerably larger and seeing how it looks, putting a bend halfway so they point sideways/down might help with the large claws look.
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Quote skittle Replybullet Posted: 12 December 2016 at 4:28pm
If this is a lobster, then where are it's wheels?
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Quote administrative Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2016 at 4:26am
OMG Skittle! That is such a good point! And thanks TheChannel, I've implemented your feedback:

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Quote administrative Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2016 at 4:36am
This would be the crablobster in proximity to the playable character. I hope he's not too big now.

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Quote Limes Replybullet Posted: 14 December 2016 at 8:33am
oh boy. This again.
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Quote administrative Replybullet Posted: 15 December 2016 at 3:48am
So I added some shading to make it a better fit. I'm not sure where I should put the tail, if anywhere.

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