Pixel Joint Forum: {game project)-just started to do the art for it

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   Hi, guys I was following the pixel joint web & forum pretty long time never had the courage to sign up and post my works ...

not so long ago I started to work with friend programmer on our second game together and we planning on work on it for pretty long (as we started to do art for it like a week ago after we gather our thoughts about the direction)

here some creature designs and their little animations I made I will be more than glad to hear any feedback and try to improve as more as I can, thank anyone how took his time to have a look & feedback on it :) 

hope its ok if I keep update on this thread about it :) 

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BluChu121 Seaman Joined: 01 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Topic: {game project)-just started to do the art for it Posted: 01 January 2018 at 11:55pm
	Hi, guys I was following the pixel joint web & forum pretty long time never had the courage to sign up and post my works ... not so long ago I started to work with friend programmer on our second game together and we planning on work on it for pretty long (as we started to do art for it like a week ago after we gather our thoughts about the direction) here some creature designs and their little animations I made I will be more than glad to hear any feedback and try to improve as more as I can, thank anyone how took his time to have a look & feedback on it :) hope its ok if I keep update on this thread about it :)
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 02 January 2018 at 9:16am
	These are fun designs, I like them! Of course it's alright if you share these, and update this thread about your progress :). As for a little feedback: I can't really tell what the wings/arms are supposed to be on the tall monster in the middle. The monster in the eggshell is going up and down so fast that the mouth and eyes on the sun above him are a bit hard to read, and so is the face inside the mouthi. It took a long time to realize that there are mountains and the mountains have a pair of eyes and eyebrows too. Maybe separate the sun and clouds from the monster so that it can move independently? The eyeball monster between the ones I mentioned has it's hand rotating, but it looses connection with the main sprite, maybe fix that? By the way, the forum has a zoom feature, so there is no need to post scaled images. If you post them at 1x it's easier for people to make edits or view them on other devices. What's the context where these animations will be used? Do you have any game mockups or screenshots?
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BluChu121 Seaman Joined: 01 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 02 January 2018 at 9:49am
	Hi, thank you for the feedback :) the tall monster-I was trying to make the hands behind the back remind of a bell shape but I guess it's not enough pronounced I will try to redo it maybe if the hands will move like a bell it will be more clear what its supposed to be? the sun monster- I was thinking that something there isn't working thanks for making it clear to me it's really too fast for so many details on it :) the eyeball monster- lol I didn't notice it hahaha I will fix it :) and yeah I kinda didn't know I can zoom in the forum bits :3 my mistake we actually started it so I started with the monster sprites I will soon try out to make some backgrounds and environments to test them out with this will be the first appearances in the battle system or when you meet them in the wild (it's going to be an RPG game with some adventure point and click elements the idea is that each monster type belong to another district and symbolize some parts of human nature and each district will be with a different color palate which will work with the over district as they are all linked and work with each over I guess I will re-upload now the images in their original sizes :) and will update new stuff and the fixed ones to here on the weekend :3
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BluChu121 Seaman Joined: 01 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 02 January 2018 at 10:40am
	I tried to fix and smooth the sun monster its still looks a bit weird
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BluChu121 Seaman Joined: 01 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 02 January 2018 at 10:46am
	fixed the eye one too :3
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BluChu121 Seaman Joined: 01 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 02 January 2018 at 11:11am
	and another tryout to fix the sun monster
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BluChu121 Seaman Joined: 01 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 8	Posted: 02 January 2018 at 12:45pm
	fixed the bell girl
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