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Quote LiteraryPixels Replybullet Topic: Witch at Desk
    Posted: 20 September 2018 at 5:50pm
EDIT: Here is the latest version of this animation!



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Here's my latest WIP! I've been working on my same witch character, except this time she's writing at a desk. Not 100% sure about the color or shape of the quill. All feedback is very welcome!

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Quote mkd Replybullet Posted: 21 September 2018 at 4:37am
Hello! Just a few quick comments:

-I think the shadow colors on character & clothings should be stronger (more contrasted)
-The books on the table have no perspective
-The table could have a more complex shape (for now it's just a cube)
-the action could be more clear (for example: if the character is just writing / stopping for thinking / writing again she should be slower. If she stops writing to see if there is danger she could be faster, with a worried face...)
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Quote LiteraryPixels Replybullet Posted: 21 September 2018 at 12:07pm
Thank you so much! Facepalming over the perspective on the books. I'll see about adjusting the shadows and the animation, and maybe take a poke at the table! I really appreciate the feedback :)
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Quote LiteraryPixels Replybullet Posted: 29 September 2018 at 1:03pm
Here's the latest version! I adjusted some of the colors, edited the perspective on the books, made the desk a little more interesting (I'm okay with it still being fairly simple), gave the earrings a bit more bounce, and slowed the time when she's contemplatively looking up.

Still not totally satisfied with the quill, but I'm getting close to calling this piece done!

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