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    Posted: 04 May 2019 at 11:17am
Hi! I've done some drawing in the past but just getting back into it now and wanting to dive into pixel-art. Interested in some feedback on some small pieces.

The anvil took me a quite a few hours as I sketched it first but then took the time to work on the curved lines.

thanks!



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Quote - Replybullet Posted: 05 May 2019 at 3:58am
The anvil:
I'm by no means an expert, but I would add a little more contrast and some more dirt, along with reflective patches (the hammering would probably add scuffs).

Also, maybe the pespective looks a tad wonky? The top-most region shouldn't be so high...or is it just me?

Other that than, it actually looks quite good!

The other thing (I don't know it's english name - can only think of a "tina" - portuguese name):

Looks quite good, but way too regular? Seems a lot like you began with a 2-point-perspective idea and changed your mind?

Other than this minor point, I would say it's quite good as well! How many colours are you using on those?
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