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Quote PixelNovak Replybullet Topic: Jolyne Kujo
    Posted: 13 June 2019 at 4:25pm
I just created her lineart, any suggestions?

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Quote Sarahboev Replybullet Posted: 14 June 2019 at 12:38pm


Hey RankarchVoid! Its a pretty sweet lineart of Jolyne.

So here's just some thoughts-

1: The finger kinda pulls a tangent with the pattern on her shirt. I'd shorten or lengthen it a tad.

2: This elbow area feels sharp and wonky. I'd try to smooth it out a bit by adjusting lines or anti aliasing.

3. Same thing with 2. The lines stick out a bit here. The elbow also feels a bit cut off? I'd find an arm reference with the forearm in this sort of position and see how the elbow shape looks.

4. This might just be me but perspective wise it might make sense to curve this bun in a bit. Kinda along the left side of my red circle I doodled.

Hope it helps! Always cool to see JJBA pixel stuff!
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Quote PixelNovak Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2019 at 12:36pm
Originally posted by MalevolentMask



Hey RankarchVoid! Its a pretty sweet lineart of Jolyne.

So here's just some thoughts-

1: The finger kinda pulls a tangent with the pattern on her shirt. I'd shorten or lengthen it a tad.

2: This elbow area feels sharp and wonky. I'd try to smooth it out a bit by adjusting lines or anti aliasing.

3. Same thing with 2. The lines stick out a bit here. The elbow also feels a bit cut off? I'd find an arm reference with the forearm in this sort of position and see how the elbow shape looks.

4. This might just be me but perspective wise it might make sense to curve this bun in a bit. Kinda along the left side of my red circle I doodled.

Hope it helps! Always cool to see JJBA pixel stuff!


Thanks for all those tips, already fixed them! Hope to show you all the results soon.
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