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Quote ZerotuL Replybullet Topic: [Wip][CC]Kerrigan
    Posted: 17 August 2020 at 2:19pm
Greetings fellow squaretists
Doing pixel art for a couple of months and and seeking for some feedback. Here is my current project.

I would like to know what parts are good, what parts are bad and causes your eyes bleed. Share you good habits/techniques to get clean results when drawing a face.
Department i still struggle in: Cloak and mask wrinkles, muscle elevations, properly angle some gear pieces, ray tracing(for example gem light spreading on nearest surfaces-this multiplies colors in palette if i use blending)

Here is tiny bonus. Progress of face features.
https://imgur.com/a/DrMajpl

Much appreciated for invested time.
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Quote ZerotuL Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2020 at 4:36am
Progress going slow, but well
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2020 at 5:58am
Hi, welcome!
The update makes it much more clear where this is going.

What's up with the two dark vertical lines on her face? I don't understand how the shadow work.

The from the shadows of her hair, seem a bit close together. Also you need a very strong one directional light source, and not much atmospheric light, to get such a strong shadow from thin strands of hair!

For the next update, consider posting it unscaled without background, instead of a screenshot. The forum has a built in zoom function, click to zoom and shift+click to zoom out!

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Quote ZerotuL Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2020 at 7:56am
Thanks for the feedback.

"What's up with the two dark vertical lines on her face? I don't understand how the shadow work."
I am experimenting and those lines are just drafts. Planned source of light is above her or above her and slightly closer to us-viewers.Changed a bit and added simple highlight on her chin.
"The from the shadows of her hair, seem a bit close together."
Fixed.
"Also you need a very strong one directional light source, and not much atmospheric light, to get such a strong shadow from thin strands of hair!"
Reasonable, fixed
Update with feedback taken into account
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