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Quote Lumataru Replybullet Topic: Twitch Banner
    Posted: 28 April 2021 at 11:13am
Hello, am working on a banner which I intend to use for a upcoming Twitch Channel. The channel will primarily be a art channel and its theme will be that of calm, relaxing, ASMR, Late Night talk with some indie gaming mingled in. The character in the banner is a OC of mine named Marsha. I've been attempting to make her my mascot. I want the banner and any additional art I make to have a Lofi or Jazzy look but I also want it to kinda match my studio which has a lot of bright rainbow colors and lights. This is just one banner but I have another idea as well but I wanted to finish this one sense I got started. I do a lot of pinup type art in addition to Pop art and mixed media, so I was hoping that this design captures that feel. I'm debating on changing the name; Joeys Net Toons was a name idea I had a year ago because I was attempting to make digital media for online clients such as Twitch Streamers. This was also a excuse to make my first post in these forums so HELLO!
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Quote SeinRuhe Replybullet Posted: 28 April 2021 at 1:01pm
Hi and welcome to the PixelJoint forums!

Please do not post upscaled art on the forums, a pixel should measure a pixel, not more. There's a functionality that allows to zoom in on any image by clicking it and zoom out by using CTRL+click.

A great way to find mistakes is to flip your piece horizontally (Or vertically for really challenging fixes), here's the flipped version of your piece.



Here are my thoughts on what could make the piece look better:

      - Get rid of the dithering, it seems like it's doing more harm than good to the piece

      - Pick up a position for a light source and render your piece accordingly, as it is shadows and highlights seem to be putted at random. Every plane that faces towards the light should have the lightest values, every plane that faces away form the light should have the darkest values. Specular only happens on planes that reflect light from the lightsource directly to the viewer.

      - The rainbow effect have colors swapped out of place, in the light spectrum the color next to the yellow is green, not blue. So the correct order for your piece should be red, orange, yellow, green, blue.

      - The character seems to have structural issues, specially on her limbs, look at reference when drawing, improvement is almost immediate.

      - There are 36 almost identical colors with alpha on your piece, get rid of them, this is seen as a mistake on pixel art.

Hope this helps!
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Quote Limes Replybullet Posted: 18 May 2021 at 2:28am
I feel like if you flipped the character like above with elbow poiting to the right side that would create more balance in composition. other then that, maybe some button shading on the font would make it pop more.
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