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   heres a weird sprite comic i did with my charecters its really weird i just wanted to show it


i put sprite tutorials up ion my site


http://magivolve.com/phpbb2/viewforum.php?f=14

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keyeske Seaman Joined: 12 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Topic: Weird comic im doing Posted: 19 May 2005 at 1:44am
	heres a weird sprite comic i did with my charecters its really weird i just wanted to show it i put sprite tutorials up ion my site http://magivolve.com/phpbb2/viewforum.php?f=14
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 19 May 2005 at 4:11pm
	Perosnally, I'm not a fan of these types of "comics". I see these in the pixel art section of Deviant Art ALL the time. One main issue I have is that in the first panel the one dude/chick (?) has the armband on the left and in the next panels it's on the right. Also, the background doens't look like it was made as pixelart. It looks like a grain filter was put on top of it. Plus, it's mirrored where the trees meet on the right and looks off. It would also be a plus to see the characters move in different poses rather than having them all standing stagnantly. 'nuff said
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 19 May 2005 at 8:49pm
	It might help if the comic panels were smaller. It's nice to be able to see the full comic without scrolling.
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Zoomrix Commander Joined: 27 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 342	Posted: 21 May 2005 at 7:15pm
	It panel #4 it looks like the dude with the teddy has his right (our left) arm broken off. Probably would've looked better if you actually sprited the arm in that position rather than spinning it to that position, I like the scene though...
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