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Garage Inc.
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Quote Garage Inc. Replybullet Topic: Warped Building
    Posted: 20 May 2005 at 2:25pm

That is a warped building.

Ive already posted it on the main site, but I can always edit.

All c+c is welcome.

Heres 3 versions of the same scene, with a different highlight on each one.

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edit 1

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edit 3

Which ones the best, and is the scene even any good?



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Quote sedgemonkey Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2005 at 11:11am

It's well drawn, but it's just kind of meh, ya know?  A plain old building is hard to make interesting even if it is warped.  Maybe you could add a tiny scene around it to spice it up.

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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2005 at 2:16pm
Sedge is right... You should add some trees and cars parked next to the building or something.
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Quote Zoomrix Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2005 at 2:19pm
Yep a small spiffy scene would be nice. And did you purposefully not add highlights
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Quote Garage Inc. Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2005 at 3:15pm
Im adding a scene right now.
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Quote Garage Inc. Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2005 at 5:15pm
Edited first post.
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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2005 at 1:14am
Nice, looks much better now.
The fence behind the building looks a bit too high though... It's almost as high as half the building
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