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Rifts
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
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as u mite know if uv read the PAD post, im makeing a pixel website
called PAD and im going to put a comic on it i have started, heres one of them, if you want to see any of the others check the comic section in www.xaosswebdesign.com here is one C+C plz ![]() Edited by sedgemonkey |
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sedgemonkey
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I like the pace and the format. Keep it up! One thing that bothers me a bit is that the word bubbles are transparent... seems like a white bg is always good policy. |
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Garage Inc.
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318 |
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So do you go from top to bottum or side to side? I'm pretty sure you go from top to bottum. I like it. Cool little comic. Can't wait to see more. |
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For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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Rifts
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
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left to right. ill make any new comics with a white BG thanks for tht
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Garage Inc.
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318 |
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I knew that...either way it's good. Haha.
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For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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samson
Seaman ![]() Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
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Yeah, works both ways, tho it feels a bit different depending which way it's read...
Kinda bothers me that the pic doesn't change. Comics are a visual, time-based medium. Your script would read the same if it was just dialogue. Having the visual component allows u to add to your message, adding new meaning or just some visual narration. Don't lose track of the storytelling aspect. And yeah, I know Clowes does this all the time. But he's him, and you're not yet. :P |
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sedgemonkey
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Originally posted by samson
Yeah, works both ways, tho it feels a bit different depending which way it's read... Kinda bothers me that the pic doesn't change. Comics are a visual, time-based medium. Your script would read the same if it was just dialogue. Having the visual component allows u to add to your message, adding new meaning or just some visual narration. Don't lose track of the storytelling aspect. And yeah, I know Clowes does this all the time. But he's him, and you're not yet. :P Very well said. Did you ever read Scott McCloud's book on understanding comics? |
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samson
Seaman ![]() Joined: 21 May 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20 |
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Scott is God.
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