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der.uwe
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Quote der.uwe Replybullet Topic: new here with a little spritie
    Posted: 17 June 2005 at 5:01am
Guess who they are?

And please give some critics


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Quote E-ren Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2005 at 5:13am

I would suggest some more shades in the hair, and maybe some dithering...
What are those 2 things the girl's holding?
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Quote der.uwe Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2005 at 5:17am
shes holding drumsticks,
what about the rest of the shading and the faces?
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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2005 at 11:46am
ah... I see.. it's The White Stripes. Nice dude
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Quote Demon Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2005 at 3:04pm
It would help if you did some dark outlining, that would help distiguish certain features.  And the shades of each main color are very close.  Also, highlights/shine are always fun to have, they show that something is not flat; just shading it shows levels, but not 3D-ish.  :D
"At least we killed some boredom..." - Death Note.
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Quote Rifts Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2005 at 3:25pm
cud do with a tad more contrast between the shades
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Quote Bear Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2005 at 11:24am
so sexy!!! i think selout would make it even more sexy!!
and a little more contrast on the darker shades, and maybe even a outline instead of selout :D
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