Pixel Joint Forum: my first iso garden *edit any better*

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   well its my first time at iso and this was inspired by habbo hotel its not finished yet wat you think?

any c+c?
any better i added more space and a towel?

Edited by x!candi!x

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x!candi!x Seaman Joined: 22 March 2005 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: my first iso garden edit any better Posted: 22 March 2005 at 12:12pm
	well its my first time at iso and this was inspired by habbo hotel its not finished yet wat you think? any c+c? any better i added more space and a towel? Edited by x!candi!x
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Josh Seaman Joined: 21 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 22	Posted: 22 March 2005 at 12:14pm
	Its really nice maybe some more work on the grass
	//Aspiring pixel artist
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Sibix Commander Joined: 12 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 22 March 2005 at 12:17pm
	maybe make it bigger so i have more to comment on, the tree needs a bit more shading and it will be good :D
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 24 March 2005 at 11:47am
	The patches of darker grass might look better if they were less "pathy". Give it more of a dithered natural feel.
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spymp3 Midshipman BANNED Joined: 02 June 2005 Location: Netherlands Online Status: Offline Posts: 81	Posted: 03 June 2005 at 5:19pm
	Only the bushes are not the right colour: -the bush has suposed to be green - maybe some red fruit in the bush
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mmmm Seaman Joined: 04 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 08 June 2005 at 2:38am
	It's nice. The bushes are ok with me, although I'd make them more brownish. The black outlines are too dark, considering the rest of the picture has low contrast. I'd move the bushes around, the ones at the middle tree are placed rather sugestively. And the shading on the trunks is invisible, it's too dark.
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