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Quote Monkeyman Replybullet Topic: Newbies First peice of Pixel art
    Posted: 24 March 2005 at 1:48pm
HI i am new to Pixel art and i want to improve my skills doing pixel art on the P.c. I think that the only way i can improve is for people to coment on my work and tell me ways of improving my work, so here is my Pixel Art Picture;

Please comment!  (not finished yet got to do the sky and the road yet)


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Quote Monkey_man Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2005 at 3:27pm
its pretty good but i think u should add more color or a different color to the roof cuz it looks kinda plain but also NICE NAME?
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Quote Saboteur Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2005 at 8:48pm
You put a shadow on the building, but it does not reflect on the walls of it. I'd say establish a light source, and lighten/darken the surfaces accordingly.
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Quote Garage Inc. Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2005 at 10:34pm

I made a little edit. Didn't change much.

Look at that and try to redo your coloring.

You have the basics of iso down great. The lines and the idea, but without good coloring, all that is no good.

Look at mine and redo yours and post it again and you will get some more c+c on it.

 

Good Luck

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Quote Monkeyman Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2005 at 4:19am

Thanks guys. 

i will take your ideas onboard and trya and make my Pixel Art building look alot better.

btw Nice edit Garage Inc.



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Quote stryder Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2005 at 7:30am
ive seen this in a tutorial before ?!
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Quote Sibix Replybullet Posted: 25 March 2005 at 11:03am
i made a little tutorial before wich he used.

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