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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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This is for my homie pixelblink... C+C appreciated and this actually will be revised. Edit: Accidentally deleted the first WIP pic. Edited by sedgemonkey |
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Kirra
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 12 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 41 |
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ooo000ooo aaaahhhha.... Me like. its pretty kickass
- Obviously he has no arm. ![]() ![]() - lots of dithering which is good cept for on his neck. soo.. uhh.. yeah. But you probably already knew that too. - even though his legs are supposed to be wide apart (probably) i think the legs are a bit too skinny. I think maybe a tiny bit wider. *sucks at c+c-ing* Overall though, that is hella neat. I love your techniques and style. It's very unique. |
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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Yeah, I guess this is kind of a lame pic to post for C+C... it's in such a half-assed state that it's hard to tell what I missed and what I just haven't gotten to.
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Smite_O_Rama
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 10 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 55 |
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Looks good to me so far. The only thing that really stands out to me
the dark lines around the eyes. They look a little out of place. Can't
wait to see an update.
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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word up homie g! This looks promising so far except for that crotch area. Why so flat? What's going in there? Also his left cheek look a bit bumpy. *waits impatiently for updates |
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Saboteur
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888 |
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He looks like a monkey was his father and his mother was a barstool. Father - headscratching Mother - the legs (I half expect Istvan to make a peice involving monkey and barstool relations, only because of that one odd peice he did involving the nude people and the ape.) Thus far, it's good. Which is almost mandatory, coming from you. He's almost got the furrowed brow look going on, but it's too faint to actually distinguish it for what it is on the first glance. I'm assuming that the left eye and the nose and bridge thereof are still in progress. The one thing I'm curious about is what the other arm is going to do. Dual-handed head scratching seems most likely to me. One more thing. The hand is pretty soft and smooth for such an angular peice. Augh, I've got more. The face seems a little off kilter with the head. I.E. after staring at it for a while it looks as if his face is more on the side of his head than in front. There, that was full-effort C and C. Edited by Saboteur |
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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by the way, it's really nice to see an ACTUAL work in progress piece being placed int eh WIP section. I'm getting tired of all these faux-wip's. People seem to think that their first draft is always the last draft. I'd like ot see less of those and more updated wip's. People need to learn and grow from these forums, not leech for comments. /rant |
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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Updated the WIP... still not sure what to do with the sky and bg.
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Bear
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147 |
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BUILDINGS!!! and they have to be abstract and deformed!
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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pink? pink is bad... definitely bad. almost 8 o'clock... gotta watch Jeopardy... jeopdary yeah. I like jeopardy. Pink is bad /rant ala Rain Man |
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purple_monkey
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 27 |
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Looking good, looks like corn-field he´s standing on but without the corn lol. Nice minimalism of the colours and the shading style. Do some dithering around the sun please :). Don´t know what to put inthe BG though. :S I´m not very imaginative hehehe. Hope these few ideas will help. Keep up the good work segdie
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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Another crack with some funky hills... also fixed some of the lame outlines and dark spots in the hair. |
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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Another update.... changed some of the colors and ditched a few highlights
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Bear
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147 |
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sexy! i love the blue hues, i didn't know why i didn't think of asking
you why you didn't do that in the first place, well anyways, what about
the abstract buildings?
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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I was thinking of doing some small mushroom buildings around his feet. |
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Bear
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 147 |
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:o that's even cooler!! like he's stepping on ppl or something XD
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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I dunno dude. I'm thinking this guy could do better with some actual normal colours on him
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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Wanted to go for some more funky colors sucka. Ugh, can't seem to get this piece going... everything I add looks out of place. I just bumped up the contrast and called it good. Maybe I'll come back to it later, but for now I think I'm gonna take a break. 6 colors. Border style inspired by monsoon2d. |
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Saboteur
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888 |
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I see you kept the brow that looks like it wants to be furrowed. At least you can see it now, but it seems so suggest a frown upon the face. The shadow, as well, is a little botched. Or maybe its meant that way. Who knows And has Istvan seen this? he's the master of random colour selection. Remember the foglien? |
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"I was minding my own business and walking across a pebbled path, and a Duck started giving me the business."
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Citizen_Insane
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189 |
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Sedge, this is pretty sweet. It's a really interesting piece. The colors remind me of super game boy.. but that's fine, I promise. I was thinking though, maybe you should put something else in there, |
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tommy j4sun
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 128 |
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really coo.
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kankki
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 26 March 2005 Location: Finland Online Status: Offline Posts: 195 |
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This one was really nice. Especially with the tiny amount of colours and nice dithering, keep the nice work up man
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Di0xygen
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 03 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 401 |
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if you allow me to bring it up that way, i love the style, major
abusive dithering with a very new age style, very corporate whore
feeling to it(surely the tie) and i love that.
keep up the good job :D im always facinated by your works ![]() |
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