Pixel Joint Forum: #female pilot

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here she is, shes one of my main chars in a game im planning to do..
but i hawe some problems with how to color her stomach region, plz help me!
and i really want some c&c and feel free to rate it (1-10)
and by the way, im new, so hello fellow Pixel artists 
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i really want c&c so its okey to be hard on me 
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i hawe changed almost ewerything, boots, pants, breast armor and i hawe added A HEAD!! and yes, it sux! i hope ill hawe a better face tommorow 

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Graint Seaman Joined: 04 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Topic: #female pilot - new wersion ready to c&c! Posted: 04 July 2005 at 8:48am
	here she is, shes one of my main chars in a game im planning to do.. but i hawe some problems with how to color her stomach region, plz help me! and i really want some c&c and feel free to rate it (1-10) and by the way, im new, so hello fellow Pixel artists edit i really want c&c so its okey to be hard on me edit 2 <<new - old>> i hawe changed almost ewerything, boots, pants, breast armor and i hawe added A HEAD!! and yes, it sux! i hope ill hawe a better face tommorow Edited by Graint
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Godslayer Midshipman Joined: 26 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 69	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 9:03am
	The right leg (her left) is kinda messed up in the calf area, its bending like it's broken.
	Oi.
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Graint Seaman Joined: 04 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 9:06am
	oh thanks i can see that now..
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 12:26pm
	Might want to lighten the bg so the suit pop outs. Hard o make out the black on the dark blue.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 12:31pm
	i hope youre not gonna animate that. as for the piece, try to first finish up the shapes before you add detail (like.. theres no head yet)
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Graint Seaman Joined: 04 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 1:21pm
	hehe i actully made the bg a dark color because it makes it easyer to see details if the sprite is dark.. but ill post a better wersion later ;) and no im NOT gonna animate it! it would be.. well wery hard! im using the sprite to show char' design and to get peoples interest in the game.. and about the head thing, ya i know but i just got tired of doing the line art so i began to color it, its a pitty because her head is the most importen and charecteristic things about her.. and im sorry for my sad spelling
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kankki Commander Joined: 26 March 2005 Location: Finland Online Status: Offline Posts: 195	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 1:30pm
	6!
	Well, duuuh, I can eat spam if I have to!
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 1:30pm
	THEN JUST GIVE HER A HEAD (ladies and gentlemen.. its very important to read the word ''a'' in this sentence.. do not forget or weird things might pop in your mind)
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Graint Seaman Joined: 04 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4	Posted: 04 July 2005 at 1:37pm
	well snader... im going to!!! and thanks Kankki hope youre all gonna like my next wersion of her
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