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Afflict
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 April 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Posted: 17 September 2006 at 11:24am |
My latest work in progress...
![]() The grass had me down for awhile but i got the better of it lol Anyway hows it looking so far? Edited by Afflict - 17 September 2006 at 11:24am |
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fthmdg
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 16 August 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 100 |
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i like the top of the plant and the grass, but the leaves on the plant and the stem have no detail. im sure you're going to add that, but just someting i noticed. theres also a few spots in the grass where its flat, as apposed the the rest of the grass sticking up.
also, the line art on the rat looks off for some reason. the area behind the wiskers is very pointed for some reason, and just looks a lil off to me. other than that, its lookin good. Cant wait to see the finished version. ![]() |
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Afflict
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 April 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
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Hey thanks, the detail is still comming I detail when i pixel the line art is an indication and a general for me :) also the flat grass is a product of the flat piece i have done on the right.
The rat hehe is furry one ill show you guys when I am done its already looking good in my mind its just the vision of the artist. Thanks for the comments! Cheers Afflict. |
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Morgan
Midshipman ![]() Joined: 25 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94 |
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I dunno if you're shading it that way on purpose, but it looks very flat. More shading across the whole thing would look better, I think: |
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