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3_32
Seaman 
Joined: 14 March 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 24 |
   Topic: Pirate "Cpt. Morgan"Posted: 02 December 2006 at 10:49am |
 It was for a contest which ended about two months ago, only just got round to finishing it though :x I could use some C&C before I put this to rest again Edited by 3_32 - 02 December 2006 at 11:09am |
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ceddo
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Joined: 01 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 466 |
Posted: 02 December 2006 at 10:59am |
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You don't have to put [PA] in front of all your pixel art WIP's, you only have to put in [NPA] if it's not pixel art :P
It's great, ii love the black outlines and the character's pose. However, The left knee looks strange compared to the rest of the image because it uses colors that are completely different to the rest of the image. You could change this by making the knee the same ramp as the sword, or add more purple in different areas, like add a big purple feather poking out from his hat. :D |
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3_32
Seaman
Joined: 14 March 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 24 |
Posted: 02 December 2006 at 11:59am |
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I don't particularly enjoy the shape of the feather, however I did fix the knee colours. i think |
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I have never killed a man, but I have read many obituaries with great pleasure.
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skeddles
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Posted: 02 December 2006 at 7:50pm |
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i think it looks awsome...i disagree with the feather being orange, but its your art.
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Fool
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Joined: 25 September 2018 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 38 |
Posted: 03 December 2006 at 12:35am |
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Sword arm looks short , otherwise looks good, stylish.=) |
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3_32
Seaman
Joined: 14 March 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 24 |
Posted: 03 December 2006 at 1:26am |
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Hmm, Thanks for the comments, not sure about the sword arm thingy though. Anyway, I finsihed this up this morning after work, cos the next challenge is a christmas theme so i want to get drafting.
Anyway:  Edited by 3_32 - 03 December 2006 at 1:26am |
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Fool
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Joined: 25 September 2018 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 38 |
Posted: 03 December 2006 at 1:29am |
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Elbow normally inline with a waist.=) Compair to the other arm.
Edited by Fool - 03 December 2006 at 1:31am |
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3_32
Seaman
Joined: 14 March 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 24 |
Posted: 03 December 2006 at 1:39am |
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Oh yeah, I see it now. I won't go back and redo the arm though too much hassle. But I'll remember it thanks ^_^
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