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Xisto
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 March 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 52 |
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Here is a dead topic of jack pumpkin http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=3302
Well i try to fix the pumpkin and i add some stuff ![]() now my 2 projects ![]() joe the emo, for my friend xD, i think this is finished, but i need comments and some critics =P ![]() this is alex stronghold, for my game, i dont like it, i need so much help in this sprite |
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Just to let you know, you didn't have to make a new topic. We frown on bringing dead topics back only if the author has no intentions of further work on it.
As for the pumpkin, I suggest you remove the black outlines and try to define shapes with your shading.
The 'emo' doesn't look very polished, and several areas, like the camera, are shaded to have a bevel when they don't.
The game character is better than some of your other pieces, but I suggest you keep joint positions in mind; the torso is not a uniform tube and neither are arms. Once again, I suggest removing the black outlines.
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Xisto
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sry for the late post, i dont have much time to do some pixel arts =P
![]() i added out lines ![]() i try to clean the lines ![]() new version =P |
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Xisto
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comments please xD
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Xisto
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sry for the double post, please someone comment, here's my newest work =P
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Aleiav
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That seems to be oekaki, moreso than pixel art.
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Xisto
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How about jack pumpkin, it ready to post in PJ?
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Pieface
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The pumpkin is just mainly pillow shaded, could use with a little dithering and also some AA
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Xisto
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wheres pillow shading?
wow i dont have any techniches of AA, sure i need help |
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Pieface
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The Pumpkin (Inside and Outside) and staff (Top) has pillow shading
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Aleiav
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st0ven has some AA tutorials.
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Xisto
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![]() here the new version |
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Xisto
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