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Quote Xisto Replybullet Topic: 2 Projects + Final version of jack pumpkin
    Posted: 18 November 2006 at 3:13am
Here is a dead topic of jack pumpkin http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=3302

Well i try to fix the pumpkin and i add some stuff



now my 2 projects



joe the emo, for my friend xD, i think this is finished, but i need comments and some critics =P



this is alex stronghold, for my game, i dont like it, i need so much help in this sprite
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 18 November 2006 at 6:55am
Just to let you know, you didn't have to make a new topic. We frown on bringing dead topics back only if the author has no intentions of further work on it.
 
As for the pumpkin, I suggest you remove the black outlines and try to define shapes with your shading.
 
The 'emo' doesn't look very polished, and several areas, like the camera, are shaded to have a bevel when they don't.
 
The game character is better than some of your other pieces, but I suggest you keep joint positions in mind; the torso is not a uniform tube and neither are arms. Once again, I suggest removing the black outlines.

RPG is numberwang.
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Quote Xisto Replybullet Posted: 27 November 2006 at 8:18am
sry for the late post, i dont have much time to do some pixel arts =P



i added out lines



i try to clean the lines



new version =P
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Quote Xisto Replybullet Posted: 28 November 2006 at 6:39pm
comments please xD
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Quote Xisto Replybullet Posted: 02 December 2006 at 12:28pm
sry for the double post, please someone comment, here's my newest work =P


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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 02 December 2006 at 9:30pm
That seems to be oekaki, moreso than pixel art.
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Quote Xisto Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 8:58am
How about jack pumpkin, it ready to post in PJ?
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Quote Pieface Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 9:03am
The pumpkin is just mainly pillow shaded, could use with a little dithering and also some AA
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Quote Xisto Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 9:31am
wheres pillow shading?

wow i dont have any techniches of AA, sure i need help
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Quote Pieface Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 9:41am
The Pumpkin (Inside and Outside) and staff (Top) has pillow shading
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 4:46pm
st0ven has some AA tutorials.
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Quote Xisto Replybullet Posted: 05 December 2006 at 10:49am


here the new version
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Quote Xisto Replybullet Posted: 06 December 2006 at 9:29am


fixed the link
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