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Acke
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 August 2006 Location: Sweden Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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When boredom sets in...
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Get this big yellow beetle scuttling towards my destiny...
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jalonso
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I like it a lot. the colors are cool. For crits is its sex. Looks like both. If a girl, add hips. If a dude remove boobage.
You did a great visaul in all 3 sizes. Only the kneepads in the medium sized one are off to the other 2. |
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Acke
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 August 2006 Location: Sweden Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
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jalonso: Thanks! It's supposed to be a female. And yeah, I'm not sure about them hips, but I'm not sure how to fix them either. I'll play around with it for a bit.
Yea, she sort of went through a few changes. I started with the mid sized one, then did the tiny one and the big one last actually and changed some stuff for each version. |
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Squirrelsquid
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that's a nice concept, the shading is good too!
Though I feel, that the smaller versions got some stance issues. especialy the very small one. As for the hips: http://206.145.80.239/zbc/attachment.php?attachmentid=27919 http://blogs.guardian.co.uk/games/archives/images/lara.jpg ... a quick google search. You can find probably get better reference material, but it's a start ;) What you can see on these pictures is the typical women "8"-form... to be exact, the hips should be as wide as the shoulders. Note that you shouldn't make them as large as your shoulder-armor. |
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Acke
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Here's an update then. Do the hips look better?
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Omegavolt
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Yep, they're looking a bit better and that helps. It might help now to narrow the shoulders a bit. They're a bit man-ish right now. Try raising the elbows a bit too. :)
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Acke
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![]() ![]() New Old Better now? Edited by Acke - 06 January 2007 at 6:55pm |
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Acke
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Did a WIP portrait....
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PixelSnader
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her head is the size of a boob? allso the portrait looks a bit too masculine, maybe a narrower chin?
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