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Varock Shade
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   Topic: W.I.P Wandering Stranger... - Lock?Posted: 16 January 2007 at 10:53am |
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Sorry, i havent got a better name for it yet...
  anyway... I need tips for this pixel... Last time i had problems makeing the hair.... does anyone have tips to make a good start with it (NOT looking at the colours but at realistic shapes of the fill of the haircut)... Also, The person has a too smooth face in my opinion, irl all faces have more shapes, so i need to fix that... And before i forget to say it, i also need to change the eyes, and decide if ill go for black and white (with or without dithering) or for coloured fill etc... Can someone help me with this, by giving c&c etc...? (Oh and btw, please dont complain about some crappy square lines... My right mouse button failed to work for another day so it takes much more time to fix that now...  )Edit - Please LOCK, im starting on another project and wont be working on this for a while... Edited by Varock Shade - 20 January 2007 at 4:11am |
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PixelSnader
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Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194 |
Posted: 16 January 2007 at 3:07pm |
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the whole area below the eyes should be set back in the skull, or the eyes and forehead moved out more.
and he seriously needs a cheekbone
the lips are crooked
and the neck is seriously screwed up. no definition or muscles at all
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NMEwithin
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Joined: 29 December 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43 |
Posted: 16 January 2007 at 5:26pm |
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looks really feminine....needs a stronger jaw and thinner lips
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Varock Shade
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Posted: 17 January 2007 at 11:47am |
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Originally posted by snader the whole area below the eyes should be set back in the skull, or the eyes and forehead moved out more. and he seriously needs a cheekbone
the lips are crooked
and the neck is seriously screwed up. no definition or muscles at all Im changing the cheeks a bit, not too much, and i dont agree with moving the forehead and eyes more out... Because, if you look at a face from the side, the forehead is more to the back than the chin. And, if you would look at the nose, its a bit large... lips are a bit large, which brings me to the point of NMEwithin... Originally posted by NMEwithin looks really feminine....needs a stronger jaw and thinner lips I know the lips are kinda big, but so is the nose and the eyes a bit too... I made a drawing of this face and used a strange camerapoint, and oversized most parts of the face a bit... sooo, ill be editing a bit here and there, but not all too much i think... edit: he might also look more feminine cause without many shapes on his face he looks younger, and the fact that his hair isnt finished and that im still gonna add a beard... Edited by Varock Shade - 17 January 2007 at 12:15pm |
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