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Pownatized
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Quote Pownatized Replybullet Topic: A different pixel sig...
    Posted: 18 March 2007 at 3:43pm
Well I have to finish this one up before my other one. (Sort of a break from the huge battle scene)
 
 
I'm focusing on the guy right now. The background needs alot of work, especially the clouds and grass. But I want him down first, any changes I could make?
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2007 at 11:51pm
Nice. :) The most obvious problems with the guy is the shape of his face. It seems a bit odd in a bodily context. His body seems more realistic, his face seems more cartoony. Also his skin looks really orange.
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Quote M.E. Replybullet Posted: 19 March 2007 at 12:03am
Hello Pownatized,

The composition is great.

Ok, for the guy.
I would first suggest that  you find someone with a
(digital) camera and take a picture of you with the pose
you would like.
It will be interesting to see if you can twist your upper
body and have the legs viewed from the front and
you still keep that nice smile

Check out the knees. Probably they are a bit lower, but
also they aren't circles! Also the groin should have a little
more space.

By the way, what is he/you holding. I think there is a
book on his left, but what is the other thing? A halter?
Why is the arrow there?

Kind regards from

M.E.


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