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Pownatized
Seaman ![]() Joined: 04 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12 |
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Well I have to finish this one up before my other one. (Sort of a break from the huge battle scene)
![]() I'm focusing on the guy right now. The background needs alot of work, especially the clouds and grass. But I want him down first, any changes I could make?
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Aleiav
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380 |
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Nice. :) The most obvious problems with the guy is the shape of his face. It seems a bit odd in a bodily context. His body seems more realistic, his face seems more cartoony. Also his skin looks really orange.
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M.E.
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 26 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 430 |
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Hello Pownatized,
The composition is great. Ok, for the guy. I would first suggest that you find someone with a (digital) camera and take a picture of you with the pose you would like. It will be interesting to see if you can twist your upper body and have the legs viewed from the front and you still keep that nice smile ![]() Check out the knees. Probably they are a bit lower, but also they aren't circles! Also the groin should have a little more space. By the way, what is he/you holding. I think there is a book on his left, but what is the other thing? A halter? Why is the arrow there? Kind regards from M.E. |
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